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yinn
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Post by yinn on Jun 30, 2016 1:57:21 GMT
CHARACTER NAME Starvolt ~~> Pic Team: Looking for one Allegiance: ExplorerSpecies: PichuNature: Bold[li]-Characteristic:[/li] Sturdy body[/span] [/ul] [/span] Gender: FemaleAge: 17 1/2Ability: Lightning Rod
Appearance: Starvolt is a tiny Pichu who wears a pair of goggles on her head which she received from her father. He wore them during his time as a explorer. The goggles mean a lot to Starvolt so she wears them often. Starvolt's right paw is black up to her elbow. Personality: She can be a very serious pokemon around the right people, such as her family and friends. But usually, Starvolt is a kind Pichu who offers to be a shoulder to cry on. Starvolt's motherly instincts kick in sometimes as well, causing her to be a little strict around some Pokemon. But when befriended, she is incredibly loyal to those who are willing to give her a chance. She has a bit of difficulty with both making, and maintaining friends, however, she easily bonds with teammates because she has to work with them a lot. Starvolt loves battling, and she will give it her all when she finds herself in one. While fighting, she is not much of a talker and prefers to 'punch first, ask questions later.' In big crowds, she tends to get a little shy because of the amount of unknown pokemon around her.
Level: 5 Move 1 CharmMove 2 Tail Whip Move 3 Thunder ShockMove 4 Volt tackleLog Link: For your log once you are accepted. OOC Name: Yinn
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Post by meesh on Jun 30, 2016 2:34:39 GMT
HANG ON!
YOU NEED TO EDIT THIS A BIT... Alright, biggest issue is the age. She is way too young to be an explorer- I'd like for you to age her up to 18+ please. Secondly, could I ask you to fix all those coding errors in your app? Finally, I'd like you to give your app a once over and fix those spelling/grammar issues. Thanks!
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Post by Meiko on Jun 30, 2016 14:20:49 GMT
Appearance; Starvolt is a tiny Pichu who wears a pair of goggles on her head which she received from her father. He wore them during his time as an explorer. The goggles mean a lot to Starvolt so she wears them often.
Personality: She can be a very serious pokémon around the right people, such as her family and friends. But usually, Starvolt is a kind Pichu who offers to be a shoulder to cry on.
Starvolt's motherly instincts kick in sometimes as well, causing her to be a little bit strict around some pokémon. But when befriended, she is incredibly loyal to those who are willing to give her a chance. She has a bit of difficulty with both making and maintaining friends, however, she easily bonds with teammates because she has to work with them a lot.
Starvolt loves battling, and she will give it her all when she finds herself in one. While fighting, she is not much of a talker and prefers to 'punch first, ask questions later'.
In big crowds, she tends to get a little shy because of the amount of unknown pokémon around her.
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Post by Sundance on Jul 4, 2016 20:46:18 GMT
APPROVED!
Thanks for fixing the necessary changes!
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